In Jesiah's post the main thing that I saw was the amount of pictures that could have been reduced to make a better presentation. There was information though that had a lot to do with the main topic. Although there were a lot of pictures I found the information to be leading into the right direction. There were also some points that could have been stronger. Like how he mentioned the lighthouse and what happened to it. He could have had a picture to go with it.
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